The Brown Spots: A Lesbian Panty-Pooping Exploration

From the imagination of Chase Shivers

Series Launched: November 2013
Latest Chapter Added: 25 January 2014

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Read what others have said about The Brown Spots in the Comments.

Series Summary:
 Primary Story Codes: FFf FF Ff ff Fsolo fsolo f1st masturbation inc scat mother/daughter

A young teacher, Megan, discovers that she enjoys combining masturbation and defecation. A series of unexpected panty-pooping moments brings her close to a coworker, Chloe, and Chloe's fifteen-year old daughter Channa, and together they find they love filling panties and inhaling rank aromas.


Chapter List:

Part 1: Ripening

End of Part 1: Ripening

Part 2: Spreading -- Planned for the future!





Comments on The Brown Spots:

Author Date Comment Chase's Response
Regina 28 April 2019 Amazing! Hot story well told. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. (rating: 10) Thank you, Regina! :)
MakeMineBrown 24 October 2018 If you hadn’t liked two of my posts on Tumblr, I’d never have found your stories. My late wife, who introduced me to scat, was bi and her girlfriend lived with us. Many is the time I watched them have wonderful lesbian scat sex, twice with another friend. Loved every episode and I’d love to hear more about Megan and Chloe and Chanda and Urma. Maybe just maybe, a messy foursome might be a thought down the line! Brilliant, thank you so much (rating: 10) Thanks, MakeMineBrown! I hope to return to this series at some point, either for a sequel or for a few scenes from their lives. Stay tuned!
jimmy 23 December 2017 Hi Chase. I enjoyed this chapter much more than I expected to. In my expernce, 90% of the writing on sites like asstr and literotica is poor, so I usally read stories by women - or ostensibly so, anyway - because I get off on women 'talking dirty' even if they don't write well.

But your writing is excellent, and would be even if it weren't erotica. The pace is suitably brisk and the story is absolutely clear.

As for the content, this story ticks a lot of my most central fetish boxes: female-on-female voyeurism, an underage girl's masturbation, kinky lesbian scat play, a plot on the cusp of incest, and - probably most importantly for me - the daughter's conflict at being aroused both by shit and by seeing her mother having extreme kinky shit sex.

My only minor hesitation is that I thought you might have made more of the mother's shock at seeing her daughter masturbating as she watches the sexy-filthy scene. However, I started reading here,at this chapter. I'll go back to the earlier ones now, so the mother's reaction here may well be clearly contextualized.

Thanks very much for an excellent dirty story.(rating: 9) 		Many thanks, jimmy!

The Brown Spots was the very first story I wrote and published, so I know it has a lot of rough edges that (hopefully) my more recent stories don't have. That said, I wrote it exactly for the reasons you describe: I was tired of finding only poorly-written, uber-surreal scat stories where the characters didn't seem to be aware of how taboo and dirty and confusing such acts should be, and a lot of the scenarios in TBS couldn't be found in the other scat stories online. So, I wrote the story I wanted to read, and I think it turned out pretty good!

I hope you have a chance to go back to the beginning and read from there to the end. I'd love to know your thoughts. I may return to this story one day. I have some ideas for a second part, but I've not had a real urge to get back into it since I wrote in 2013/2014, though that could change at some point.
Anonymous 26 April 2017 More please!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!!!?!??? See my response to the comment below this one, thanks!
Anonymous 14 March 2017 Love it. Can't wait for part 2. Thanks Thanks, Anon! I will get to Part 2 eventually, but admittedly, it is not high on my priority list right now, sorry.
Anonymous 31 July 2016 Hello I was wondering when this will be continued? I do want to return to TBS at some point, but not soon, I think. I completed the story I wanted to tell in 2014, and though I have sketched out some scenes I may add in future chapters, the story is largely complete for now.
Angunn 14 June 2016 Hallo ! More about Megan , Channa , Chloe and Urma ? The best of stories ! My clit throb achingly against my panties ! I kiss my gusset for you every evening Hi Angunn! I love that you are eager for more in this series :) I don't have any new chapters to add to The Brown Spots at this time, but I would like to return and write in the series again this summer.

What scenes have been your favorites?

Thanks for the gusset kissing tribute :D I'm sure it tastes delicious :)
Anonymous 14 March 2016 Spreading !!!!! Hurry ! :)
Angunn 7 March 2016 FFf scat incest. Smelling and feeling the sensation of the act through underwear !

Menstrual ? Grandma ? Younger ? Is there more to come ? Hurry !

An older lady from Norway

Thanks for many good times ! 		Thanks, Angunn! I do hope to return to this series one day, though I don't know when. I've got a long list of chapter ideas built up since I finished this series so long ago. So glad you enjoyed it!
Anonymous 22 February 2016 Tel me more about Channa and Urma ! I hope they vil live together, get a babygirl who vil live like their mothers and grandmothers. All of them together! Cant wait... There is more about Channa and Urma in my Tender Box series, but that is a youthful lesbian romance without the scat of this series. I would like to return to Brown Spots one day, for sure.
Angunn 12 January 2016 I want to read more about Chloe, Urma , Channa and Megan. I have read the story again and again... Nothing turn me on like this ! Do you have more? Love from Angunn, a norvegian lady.Mother and grandmother! Great to hear from you, Angunn! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story! I don't have anything new for these characters involving scat at this time, but you can read more about Channa and Urma in Tender Box. That series does not have scat content, however, so it might not be what you are looking to read.
Anonymous 31 July 2015 Best scat story ever! I would have loved it if the girls had worn each other's dirty panties out in public. Also, it would have been hot if Megan and Chole had filled Channa's bra cups with their scat and Channa had gone out in public wearing it and dirty panties. I would have loved it if you had included some mensturating scenes. And last, like another reader, I would love a story involving a pregnant wife with another woman ( mother- in- law?) with scenes of scat, pee and period. Keep up the great work! Thanks! At this time, I don't have immediate plans to write more in this series, though I do have a few ideas for add-on scenes which I may get to at some point.
mfr 12 March 2015 Great Story. Please continue! I read your comment " Channa's role will be very minimal in future chapters". I would love to read more about the mother daughter situation and the every day life in a house of three panty pooping girls. I loved it when Chloe and Megan came home and Channa greeted them in soiled panties.

I really like how all three love the stench of their mess.

I also like that you focus on panty pooping but have the occasional scene with no panties and some dropping, touching that leads to brown spots. 		Thank you, mfr! In the future, when I do return to the story, I'm not certain that Channa will continue being involved. I really like her story line with Urma which broke off to be my series Tender Box, and I think I'd prefer to keep her involved there. She's a fun character in TBS, to be sure, and the best scenes (to me) include her.

That said, I've considered doing 'dream sequence' scenes which include her, allowing her to be seen in the acts with her mother and others, but which keeps those moments sort of 'non-canonical' in that they only take place in someone's dream. Kind of a compromise between cutting her from the story line completely and allowing readers to continue to see her take part. We'll see!
Anonymous 9 March 2015 I beg you. Please continue this story. I will... at some point. It was the first series I wrote and also the first one I was able to bring to a point of completion, so I'm reluctant, in some sense, to reopen it again. I felt that, plotwise, it largely completed its goal and brought the story to a good stopping point. Anything beyond that would be, to some extent, gratuitous just to get more scenes of the participants and their activities.

I do have more ideas, though, and I probably will add chapters in the future, but not any time soon, I expect. I have several series that I want to start bringing to conclusion (Shipwrecked, Run) and several more that I want to expand and grow (Flower Petals, Loose Girl, Groundhog Nights), as well as one (My Jewish Princess) which I really want to add new content to soon. Plus, I have two or three new series that I'm eager to start up once I've moved the others mentioned here some distance along, so, for months at least, I have a lot to get done.
Anonymous 2 February 2015 The brown spots stories are amazing!! Are you making anymore panty pooping or scat stories soon? Thanks! I will definitely be writing more scat stories in the future, but short term, I want to round out some of my non-scat stories (see next comment) before going back to Brown Spots or The Naturals. I have some great ideas for a new series as well involving scat, so perhaps I'll launch that this year at some point.
CS Fan 30 January 2015 Hey, Chase! Glad to see you're back to writing again :D. I have one question, though: Are you planning on writing more on the Brown Spots story? I was really hoping to see it continue (specially with some Channa Urma panty pooping action).Would love it if you could get back to me. Best of luck and will keep checking this for updates! Hi CS Fan, great to hear from you!

I do want to return to Brown Spots at some point, but I want to continue working on other series (such as Shipwrecked, Flower Petals, Groundhog Nights, Run, etc) in the short term. I have several BS chapter outlines written for a second part of that series, so I have some ideas on where to go with it when I do return.

As far as Channa/Urma... I don't think Urma will ever become involved in the series, and Channa's role will be very minimal in future chapters. I've broken those two characters off into their own non-scat series Tender Box and will probably keep them there in the future. Not that it wouldn't be hot to see Urma become involved, just that I don't think her character will be ready for anything like that any time soon (if at all). Perhaps an Urma-like character might be introduced in future BS chapters.

Thanks again!
Anonymous 11 September 2014 Are you planning to continue the Brown Spots introducing Urma to it? I really loved the series. Urma won't be part of the Brown Spots fetish play. Her character and that of Channa have been broken out to their own story in Tender Box. I will have new chapters on TBS at some point, probably as one-off scenes that add to the story rather than fully-integrated serialized into the plot.
Anonymous 2014 July 19 I absolutely loved the panty-pooping scenes where one girl was nuzzling another's filling panties. Not nearly enough of that kind of scene out there! Thanks! And, agreed, would love to see more scenes like that from other writers.
Mat 2014 May 15 That (The Brown Sports) is one of the best Stories I ever read. Thanks, Mat! Glad you are enjoying the series! You might also enjoy The Naturals since you like The Brown Spots.
Matthew 2014 May 11 I just finished chapter 27 in The Brown Spot. I must say, not only is it the longest kinky-fetish based story I've read, its the best kinky-fetish story I've ever read. I found it very very sexy, I have honestly never orgasmed to a set of words like I have with this story. Its really good, BUT its not just the sexy sexy theme that draws me back its the fact that your story has got my attention on things going on outside the literal & figerative "bedroom" for Megan, Chloe & Channa. Its the element of okay where's this going or how long is she gonna have to wait for this or that. Or even things like this, A) is there possibly a sibling Channa doesn't know about? B) Will Urma accept her deeper feelings for Channa or will she let it separate her from her friend? & C) Megan & Chloe...will there be a wedding?? These are things that keep me interested....so basically all in all I look at this as a bloody brilliant story!! Keep it cumming! Thanks for the kind complements, much appreciated! Glad to know you found the story arousing enough to cum to :) Brown Spots was a lot of fun to write, and I hope to return for another few chapters later this year. Several of the questions/thoughts you included about the series have also rattled around my mind, and when I can work on BS again, I think you'll find answers to at least some :)

The question around Urma and Channa's relationship has been answered in a spin-off series I'm actively writing called Tender Box ( here ). It is a softer, lesbian storyline (none of the core BS fetishes are present there), so it may or may not be your thing, but the relationship between the girls is developed fully in that series independent of the future plot line of BS.

Very glad you enjoyed BS. Have you read any of my series The Naturals? If you like BS, you might like that series as well.
Anonymous 2014 February 6 Megan putting herself deliberately in position where she will not have time to get to the toilet and enjoying the sensation of filling her panties Great suggestion! I can definitely see working that into a future chapter when I pick the series back up. Chloe has an experience similar to that in Chapter 26, though with the help of a buttplug from Megan :)
MK2 2014 February 3 2 words: Amazing job. My thanks, MK2!
Victoria 2014 January 31 I finished Ripening and can't wait for spreading. I enjoyed The Brown Spot your a wondeful writer. My thanks, Victoria, happy you liked it!
Jace 2014 January 26 Just to let you know that I enjoy "The Brown Spots" immensely. I haven't finished reading the series, for me it is something to savor in small portions. Thanks, Jace! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Anonymous 2014 January 13 ohhh, great stories!!!! super piss and scat stories, please more Thank you so much!
Anonymous 2013 December 29 Great read can't wait for the next instalment keep up the good work Thanks! TBS has now been finished (Part 1 at least). Hope you enjoy!
Anonymous 2013 December 26 Very nice, keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next part! Hope you like the final scenes just published January 20, thank you!
Anonymous 2013 December 20 perfect storys! so hot! just what needed!

big thanks and hope of many other storys! 		Very glad you like it, thank! Check out the series The Naturals and the one-off story The Shitting Fields if you like TBS.
Anonymous 2013 December 15 I have been enjoying your series since it was first put on this website. I have a fetish about female panty-pooping and have had it for quite some time! I really enjoy your stories and look forward to the future chapters. Thanks for reading the series. We definitely share a fetish!
Anonymous 2013 December 8 Interesting and creative. somewhat narrow focused. Biggest gripe is trying to pack too many kinks in one story. Thanks for the feedback! I'm not sure what you mean by 'narrow focused' but I can see that you might think combining panty-pooping, incest, and underage play too many. Though a lot of others seem to like!
Spandexlover 2013 December 8 Brown Spots is a great story and being a panty pooping lover, keep up the great work. Thanks. You're welcome, and thanks for reading!
Anonymous 2013 December 8 I have always had a soft spot in my life for scat scenes. Hard to find good ones. You are a start in right direction.. Very nice to hear, thank you!
Anonymous 2013 December 7 Good start. Love the ladies with secret solo vices. Thanks! I hope the rest of the series keeps your interest.
Anonymous 2013 December 5 This is just a wonderfully intimate mother/daughter relationship that could last forever in joy beyond limits. Well done you for portraying this idealism with such care and sensitivity. Only a handful of cases could rise to such heights. Thank you so much for your contributions and magnificent insightful details (author--this references Chapter 19 of TBS) Wow, thanks so much! I wasn't sure how this scene might be received but it sounds like you loved it!
Erik 2013 December 4 I love 'The Brown Spots'. The story is right up my alley! I'm also eagerly awaiting your future stories, the 'Shipwrecked' story and 'My Jewish Princess' story codes and synopsis look especially exciting.

There aren't enough scat stories on this site, so I'm glad you started posting! Scat combined with pregnancy, and maybe adult diapers would be the ultimate combo for me.

Anyway, thanks for writing such awesome stories 		Hey, thank you Erik! Great praise humbles me, I'm really glad to know you enjoy what I write. I might see about some of your suggestions in future TBS episodes, or possibly other story lines.
Anonymous 2013 December 4 Thank you again for such erotic pleasure. I feel Im right there along with Megan and Chole consumed with their sexual activities. Being a gay man who loves his dirty panty fun I am hooked on your stories.. Thank you once again Wow, what a great compliment, thanks so much!
Anonymous 2013 December 2 So wonderful, so erotic,so sexy and so well written. I feel as though I'm right there sharing it all with you. Thank you so much for the endless enjoyment. I must read on. Fantastic, thank you! My pleasure!
Anonymous 2013 December 1 Whilst I admit I am bit of an overly voracious reader of the dirtiest stories, especially stories for the last 10 years, this series about Channa, Megan and Chloe is easily the best I have ever read about dirty scat sex. Possibly the hottest story I have read about dirty sex in my experience.

I am particulary impressed about the way you deal with the issue of smells and how the characters are tormented yet reconcile with the dirty aspects of this kind of sex.

In fact, its the only story in 10 years of reading scat stories that addresses the conflicting thoughts and emotions behind the dirty sex act, in a way that both turns you on, and makes it so so realistic.

Hats off to you. The best scat story in the history of scat sex writers.

This is my first feedback to writers in 10 years of being admittedly addicted to "stories" 		Holy smokes, what gushing praise! I wish Megan, Chloe, and Channa here to give you kisses! The issues of conflicting emotions and thoughts were definitely central to the early and middle parts of the story and I hope that made the later acceptance and embracing of the fetish that much more interesting.
Anonymous 2013 November 30 This is just what the doctor ordered and your descriptive narrative is intensely appealing. I am going to enjoy all the sensations you describe most profoundly. Thank you sooooo much. Love hearing this, thank you!
Anonymous 2013 November 30 Like the slow build-up between chloe/megan. Assuming there will be a 3-some betwwen all 3 at some point. Very erotic so far, I had to pull my butt plug out midstroke and take a lick. Thanks for the compliments, keep stroking!